Monday, October 27, 2008

Haiku Part 2

My cigarette glows


A  -glows  -cigarette  -held  -viewed  - smoking  -smoke  -red  -orange  -cherry  -ashes  -illuminate  -nicotine

B  -illuminated  -mine  -glows  -hot  -smoke  -breathing  -carcinogenic  -fed  -encouraged  -burning


Without my lips touching it, --


A  -lips  -mouth  -sense  -textured  -untouched  -smoldering  -without  -unused  -resting  -touching

B  -distance(d)  -feeling  -empty  -clean  -cleansed  -lit  -neglected  -ignored  -unnoticed  -unwanted


A steady spring breeze.


A  -rain  -wind  -consistency  -balanced  -flowers  -strong  -green  -delicate  -fragile  -stable
B  -strength  -warmth  -cold  -debris  -flowing  -conformity  -encouraged  -new  -growth  -young

1 comment:

jamie said...

Words with potential for further exploration as shapes:

glows, cigarette, smoke, burning

mouth, lips, empty, ignored

wind, consistency, strength, warmth, debris