Sunday, April 5, 2009

peer edit-Jessica

1. Check grammar, spelling, fact checking, clarity of content.
2. Evaluate the overall design based on the criteria at the bottom of this post.

1 comment:

jmeurer said...

spelling mistakes:

under Harry Potter: performing tricks instead of preforming ricks

under Circus: circus instead cirucs

under Theater: performing instead of preforming

Overall:

*title feels too close to edge
*Theater needs to be centered
* and some of the other subtitles in boxes need to be equally spaced from edge of box
* the key at the bottom right, the text could be bumped up a .25 or .5 pt size to be able to read

what I liked
*consistency of subtitles boxes being the same size
* The color coding of lines
* the repeating of the title in the background creating a texture