weakness- edge of picture in relation to edge of page on Jessicas
time line with gap is a strength in relationships on mine, cam's is good because you can move throughout the page
strength- good relationship on type and the edge of the frame on mine
2. scale and visual hierarchy (including levels of read)
come in at title and size difference allows for visual hierarchy on Jessicas, along with line width on hers
cam needs more evident, less dramatic possibly for title
3. choice of typeface and typographic command
mine needs more differentiation in type face for the sake of interest and possibly for hierarchy
cams has good universal understanding and a sense of cleanliness
4. labeling (including diagram title, category headers, supportive text)
jessica has good hierarchy and good relationship between subcategories, scale is good
5. integration of icons
mine is organized
cams has an in depth understanding of icons and his icons can relate nicely via the blue green shape in poster vs the icon
6. design “devices” used to define and clarify diagrammatic structure
mine boxes make good continuity
cam has no visual containers but you can still tell certain things relate to each other
7. choice and command of color pallet
very woodsy and out doorsy that speaks to the connotations of camping
blue color to icons in cams and the "ketchup and mustard"
Mine- doesn't necessarily have a clear color connotation
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