Round two changes consist of bigger stickers, better original body copy, different photos/stickers (updated to remove the "F" from the (f)art sticker as well as to include some new stops), higher contrast, and different images taken from correct angle (taken from direction walker would see it- pre getting there).
Feedback: size of the stickers is good, get rid of back-to-back stops that happens two of the pages, possibly include a border around white space on the b/w sheets in order to more clearly denote where the stickers are supposed to go, get rid of on-the-ground graffiti image, add an image at the bottom of the stairs so you know where to stop and look around for the first sculptural image down by the second set of birdies. Positive: good interaction with stickers, good use of non-word/image based direction.
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